While trying to decide on a topic for today's blog, I was
torn between a writing type topic or a more general area of discussion. Since last week's blog was a writing topic, I
decided to continue along those lines.
A couple of days ago I was watching on old movie, the 1974
production of Agatha Christie's Murder On
The Orient Express with its all star cast where almost everyone in the movie
was a major character. It occurred to me
that there were very few characters other than the many primary ones. So I started thinking about secondary
characters and how they can be used to prod, shove and push the main characters
into and along the necessary path for the story line.
So, let's talk a bit about secondary characters.
When I say secondary characters, I'm not referring to the
minor characters that decorate a scene and maybe have a couple of lines of
dialogue. I'm talking about the characters
who have a prominent place in your story but are not your main characters. These are the characters you can use to
maneuver your main characters into and along the path toward achieving the
story goal. They are a key factor in
moving your story along and determining what direction it takes.
In developing these characters you need to decide what you
want them to accomplish and how you want them to relate to and interact with
your main characters in addition to each other in order to move your story line
along to its conclusion. Let's take a
look at how a set of secondary characters can be used to move a story line in a
specific direction. Remember, it's not
who they are, it's what they do and how they relate to the main characters and
how the main characters respond to them.
Example: You have a
story about a teenager who is the leader of a gang that has been stealing cars
for some mobsters. You have two ways you
can go with your main character, in other words, two directions your story line
can take and you must choose one of them.
#1: he wants to leave the gang and make something of his life OR #2: he
runs his gang with a iron hand and threatens anyone who wants out.
With scenario #1 your secondary characters who will
influence the story line can be his girl friend, his little brother, and one of
his teachers. That tells you who they
are, but doesn't tell you how they move the story. His girl friend fears for his safety and
finally gives him the ultimatum of leave the gang or she's leaving him. His little brother idolizes him and wants to
be just like him, but he doesn't want his little brother to make the same
mistakes he did. His teacher is
mentoring him by helping him with his studies and finding him an after school
job.
With scenario #2 your secondary characters can be his girl
friend, a rival gang leader, and his contact with the mobster who pays him for
the stolen cars. Again, that tells you
who they are but not what they do to move the story in a specific
direction. His girl friend demands more
and more in the way of material things so he needs the money from stealing cars
to keep her happy. The rival gang leader
is trying to take over his stolen car business so he has to watch his back at
all time to protect himself and his own interests. The mobster gives him access to the easy
money he needs to keep his girl friend happy and the promise of being able to
move into their organization and advance in the criminal world.
Each scenario has a girl friend, but her function is
different in the two scenarios so that the character helps move the two story
lines in two different directions.
One of the great things about secondary characters is that
you can make them as outrageous, unconventional and over-the-top as you
want. You don't have the same parameters
and cautions with secondary characters as you do with your main
characters. The main thing you need to
be careful with in creating your secondary character is to not make them more
interesting than your main characters so that they don't steal the show and
shove your main characters into the background.
A good example of secondary characters being over the top was
the television situation comedy Will and
Grace. The secondary characters of
Karen and Jack were totally outrageous while the main characters of Will and
Grace were more grounded.
Any comments about developing and using secondary characters
in your writing? Or any television
shows, movies, or books where the secondary characters stood out in your mind
with the way they were able to guide and manipulate the story line?
2 comments:
Secondary characters are a great subject for your blog! For what it's worth, here's my 'take' on them ...
Your description of their role in driving the plot and/or filling out the characteristics of the Central Character[s] are a useful reminder of the basic principle of Relevance to the plotline, not 'padding' the story for the sake of expanding the WordCount.
One thing you don't actually mention per se is a situation I've encountered a number of times, one in which a 'secondary' character unexpectedly digs in his[her] heels, shakes off the shackles, hijacks the plot and rides off screaming "Yeeeee - haaaaaahh!" into a blazing sunset - invariably in the opposite direction you as Author intended!
One such example is a "wise woman" (or 'white witch') in my forthcoming novel "The Chapel of Her Dreams" [pub. date TBA, expected May/June]
She actually BECOMES an important Central Character, which was not my original intention ...
Stories can grow (like Topsy) and alter their very nature as you write. What you end up with can on occasion become something you never intended or even expected when you made those prelim. notes before starting on Chapter One - it's happened to me several times!
Paul: So true...if you're not careful your primary secondary character(s) can easily overshadow your main characters. If you can keep them in check for that book, they could be the main character in a spin off novel.
Thanks for your comments.
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