Saturday, May 9, 2020

Secondary Characters And How To Use Them

While trying to decide on a topic for today's blog, I was torn between a writing type topic or a more general area of discussion.  Since last week's blog was a writing topic, I decided to continue along those lines.

A couple of days ago I was watching on old movie, the 1974 production of Agatha Christie's Murder On The Orient Express with its all star cast where almost everyone in the movie was a major character.  It occurred to me that there were very few characters other than the many primary ones.  So I started thinking about secondary characters and how they can be used to prod, shove and push the main characters into and along the necessary path for the story line.

So, let's talk a bit about secondary characters.

When I say secondary characters, I'm not referring to the minor characters that decorate a scene and maybe have a couple of lines of dialogue or only appear in one scene.  I'm talking about the characters who have a prominent place in your story but are not your main characters.  These are the characters you can use to maneuver your main characters into and along the path toward achieving the story goal.  They are a key factor in moving your story along and determining what direction it takes.

In developing these characters, they need to more than merely be there—more than just someone for your main character to have lunch with. You need to decide what you want them to accomplish and how you want them to relate to and interact with your main characters in addition to each other in order to move your story line along to its conclusion.  Let's take a look at how a set of secondary characters can be used to move a story line in a specific direction.  Remember, it's not who they are, it's what they do and how they relate to the main characters and how the main characters respond to them.

Example:  You have a story about a teenager who is the leader of a gang that has been stealing cars for some mobsters.  You have two ways you can go with your main character, in other words, two directions your story line can take and you must choose one of them.  #1: he wants to leave the gang and make something of his life OR #2: he runs his gang with a iron hand and threatens anyone who wants out.

With scenario #1 your secondary characters who will influence the story line can be his girl friend, his little brother, and one of his teachers.  That tells you who they are (what their relationship is to your main character), but doesn't tell you how they move the story.  His girl friend fears for his safety and finally gives him the ultimatum to leave the gang or she's leaving him.  His little brother idolizes him and wants to be just like him, but he doesn't want his little brother to make the same mistakes he did.  His teacher is mentoring him by helping him with his studies and finding him an after school job.

With scenario #2 your secondary characters can be his girl friend, a rival gang leader, and his contact with the mobster who pays him for the stolen cars.  Again, that tells you who they are and what their relationship is to your main character but not what they do to move the story in a specific direction.  His girl friend demands more and more in the way of material things so he needs the money from stealing cars to keep her happy.  The rival gang leader is trying to take over his stolen car business so he has to watch his back at all time to protect himself and his own interests.  The mobster gives him access to the easy money he needs to keep his girl friend happy and the promise of being able to move into their organization and advance in the criminal world.

Each scenario has a girl friend, but her function is different in the two scenarios so that her character helps move the two story lines in two different directions.

One of the great things about secondary characters is that you can make them as outrageous, unconventional and over-the-top as you want.  You don't have the same parameters and cautions with secondary characters as you do with your main characters.  The main thing you need to be careful with in creating your secondary character is to not make them more interesting than your main characters so that they don't steal the show and shove your main characters into the background.

A good example of secondary characters being over the top was the television situation comedy Will and Grace.  The secondary characters of Karen and Jack were totally outrageous while the main characters of Will and Grace were more grounded.

Any comments about developing and using secondary characters in your writing?  Or any television shows, movies, or books where the secondary characters stood out in your mind with the way they were able to guide and manipulate the story line?

14 comments:

Lucy K. said...

Sometimes it becomes a struggle to keep a secondary character from taking over the story. They turn out to be more interesting than the main character! Then you have to say, wait you’ll get your turn in the next book. Thanks for an interesting post.

Helen C. Johannes said...

Great discussion. Being an intuitive writer, I don't create secondary characters with those parameters in mind, but I can definitely see them fulfilling those roles when I step back an analyze what I've written.

Donna Brown said...

Nora Roberts does this so well that eventually her secondary characters get books of their own. What I notice is that each one has a different voice, style, and personality.

GiniRifkin said...

Good info. Gives new insight into secondary characters and how powerful (and fun) they can be in the story line and arc.

Margaret Carter said...

MASH became so much an ensemble-cast series that it's hard to label any of the regular characters as "secondary," but I would classify Klinger as such. He's certainly over-the-top, yet in the final seasons we get glimpses into his character that make him develop into more than comic relief -- culminating in his falling in love with a Korean girl and sacrificing his desire to return home ASAP in order to help her find her missing parents.

Fiona McGier said...

I never set out to write a series. I write one book. Then the secondary characters that I've grown so fond of, start to "talk" to me in my mind, demanding their own romance. That's how I ended up with 6 books (so far) in my first series, and at least 2-3 in most others. It's hard to move a story along with JUST the main characters, and the more you flesh out the secondary characters, the more interesting they get. Great post!

Janice Seagraves said...

I love outrageous secondary characters but with those,
you run a real problem of them taking over.

Janice~

Shawna Delacorte said...

Lucy: I think that's the biggest danger with secondary characters, even more dangerous than the secondary characters failing to do anything to move the story. If they are too interesting with their antics yet fail to move the story, then they serve no purpose.

Thanks for your comment.

Shawna Delacorte said...

Helen: Without secondary characters who help move the story, you're stuck with a one man show--your main character center stage surrounded by other characters who are nothing more than set decoration.

Thanks for your comment.

Shawna Delacorte said...

Donna: Nora Roberts does everything so well. :)

Thanks for your comment.

Shawna Delacorte said...

Gini: Yes, secondary characters can be very powerful/important for a story. They can also be a lot of fun to work with.

Thanks for your comment.

Shawna Delacorte said...

Margaret: MASH was an excellent ensemble cast. And particularly interesting (I thought) was the fact that when an actor left the show, rather than hiring a new actor to play that character (Col. Blake, Trapper, Frank Burns) they created a new character. The tv series was created from the original movie and was, therefore, tied to those same characters. Some of them were good for a movie but not three dimensional enough to sustain in a long running tv series (they weren't allowed to change and grow). The new characters (in my humble opinion) were better than the characters they replaced. I used MASH and this specific facet of the series in the writing class I taught.

Thanks for your comment.

Shawna Delacorte said...

Fiona: Spinning off a strong secondary character as the main character in another book to create a series is always something to be on the lookout for, a way of creating several manuscripts to submit to your editor.

Thanks for your comment.

Shawna Delacorte said...

Janice: I think that's the biggest danger with secondary characters, especially with one that really stands out from the others.

Thanks for your comment.